Weclome to our Writing Spot. This is a place where we can express ourselves freely and publish our work independently. There might be mistakes as our teacher will not be editing this work but hopefully you will see improvements as the year progresses. Enjoy our writing and leave us lots of comments about our ideas.
Thanks - Year 4 & 5 students of E-Team Endeavour
Thanks - Year 4 & 5 students of E-Team Endeavour
Wednesday, March 2, 2011
Tim and the wilf
Once upon a time there was a boy named tim. he lived with hi mum. They lived in the forest. There was a viledge not far up the road. One day tim went to the viledge. On the way he met a wilf. The wilf sead I am going to eat you. No your not. I will kill you first. But I will yues my clars. but I will yues my dager. So the wilf hit the boy and the boy shot the wilf. The boy fere the wolf away. and the boy cared on. When he got home his mum made tea he went to bed. And they lived happly ever after.
Wii play
Yesterday I played on my wii. Then played against my Dad and his friend. It was fun. I came 1st Celine came 2nd my Dad came 3rd but Celine still got a record.
Tuesday, February 8, 2011
My favourite place
Our favourite place is Gisborne.
Heaps of maori people live there.
In 2003/2004 they had a Gisborne party.
I had a friend in Gisborne.
My Grandparents live in Gisborne.
Thursday, February 3, 2011
Motorbikes
Can am's & king quad's are ATV's.
king quad are a new version of eiger 400 2007 4&2wd today king quad are 400 500 600.
can am
music
Quite adventurous.
It is exactly like the music off pirates of the carabian.
It makes me feel like I am in a great big storm trying to take cover.
cowboys
Once a cowboy time there were 2 cowboys called Sevao and Bradley. The 2 cowboys had two
horses and two lasous .
concert Mayhem
Once in a Town named Eastdown. At the very back of the town there was a huge stage, for all the clever guiter players. But there were two guiter players that were brand new. Their names
were steve and mr fluffy pants.
Friday, January 28, 2011
Allana - What animal am I?
Clinging to the tree in a way that takes least energy.
Eyes wide open, piercing, slowly swivelling.
Head turning subtly, hardly perceptible.
Oh well, who cares? I'll do it in my own time.
One foot inching forward, can't be too careful. Make sure it's steady and safe. What else is there to do with the day?
Time for a snooze. Snoozie ... woozie ... always half asleep.
Yawn as I watch the world rush by. Can't believe they move so fast!
Gently unfurling but nothing to do yet.
By Allana
(Inspired Impact Conference)
photo by guppiecat on Flickr
Eyes wide open, piercing, slowly swivelling.
Head turning subtly, hardly perceptible.
Oh well, who cares? I'll do it in my own time.
One foot inching forward, can't be too careful. Make sure it's steady and safe. What else is there to do with the day?
Time for a snooze. Snoozie ... woozie ... always half asleep.
Yawn as I watch the world rush by. Can't believe they move so fast!
Gently unfurling but nothing to do yet.
By Allana
(Inspired Impact Conference)
photo by guppiecat on Flickr
Allana's writing to music
We are all writers in the E-Team and when the teachers went on conference in the holidays I did some writing too.
We listened to music and had to keep writing all the time it was on. Here is my first draft about a piece of very fast band music you might hear at a parade.
Thump, thump, hoot, jumble, mixture confused.
Walking fast. Keep up or you'll be lost.
Don't get left behind. Hurry up. They're getting away.
Puff, puff. Hurry.
Quickly catch your breath.
By Allana
(Inspired Impact Conference)
We listened to music and had to keep writing all the time it was on. Here is my first draft about a piece of very fast band music you might hear at a parade.
Thump, thump, hoot, jumble, mixture confused.
Walking fast. Keep up or you'll be lost.
Don't get left behind. Hurry up. They're getting away.
Puff, puff. Hurry.
Quickly catch your breath.
By Allana
(Inspired Impact Conference)
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