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Thanks - Year 4 & 5 students of E-Team Endeavour

Friday, January 28, 2011

Allana's writing to music

We are all writers in the E-Team and when the teachers went on conference in the holidays I did some writing too.

We listened to music and had to keep writing all the time it was on. Here is my first draft about a piece of very fast band music you might hear at a parade. 

Thump, thump, hoot, jumble, mixture confused. 

Walking fast.  Keep up or you'll be lost.
 
Don't get left behind.  Hurry up.  They're getting away. 

Puff, puff.  Hurry. 

Quickly catch your breath.

By Allana
(Inspired Impact Conference)

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